On a clear and sunny morning
September the 11th America and the world are changed forever. At 8:46 a.m. a
hijacked Flight 11 loaded with 92 passengers slams into the north tower of New
York's World Trade Center. Shortly there after at 9:03 a.m. Flight 175 with 65
passengers flies into the south tower of the World Trade Center. President George W. Bush learns of
the attacks at 9:05 a.m. while sitting in a second grade classroom at an
elementary school in Sarasota, Fla. White House Chief of Staff Andrew Card
informs him of the attacks, whispering into his ear during the students'
reading lesson. At 9:37 a.m. Flight 77 with 64 people crashes into the
pentagon. After burning for 56 minutes, the south tower of the World Trade
Center collapses at
9:59 a.m. The fall, which kills approximately 600 workers and first responders,
lasts 10 seconds. At 10:03 a.m. the fourth and final hijacked commercial
airliner with 44 passengers aboard crashes in a field in Shanksville,
Pa. At 10:28 a.m. after burning for 102 minutes, the north tower of New York's
World Trade Center collapses, killing
approximately 1,400 people. All told the September 11th attacks resulted in
2996 innocent deaths as well as the 19 hijackers. More than 90 countries
lost citizens in the attacks on the World Trade Center. Most of those who
died were US citizens. It quickly became evident that the perpetrators of the
attack were cells of Islamic extremist from the radical Sunni Islamist
terrorist group al-Qaeda headed by Osama Bin Laden. In the aftermath of the
9/11 attacks America invaded Afghanistan in search of Osama Bin Laden, as well
as al-Qaeda leaders and their operatives and sought the removal of the Taliban
by force and the installation of a democratically elected government.
In subsequent years the United States, under the Bush administration, America
would also invade Iraq, remove Saddam Hussein from power and seek to install a
democratically elected government, all under the banner of the Global War on
Terrorism.

The rationale for the
Iraq War has been a contentious issue since the Bush
administration began
actively pressing for military intervention in Iraq in late 2001. The Iraq Resolution of
the U.S. Congress articulates the primary rationalization for the Iraq War. The U.S. stated that the intent was to remove
"a regime that developed and used weapons of mass destruction, that
harbored and supported terrorists, committed outrageous human rights abuses,
and defied the just demands of the United Nations and the world".
Throughout late 2001, 2002, and early 2003, the Bush Administration built a
case for invading Iraq, culminating in then Secretary of State Colin
Powell's February 2003 address to the Security Council. Shortly before the
invasion, the U.S. and UK emphasized that Saddam Hussein was
developing "weapons of mass destruction" and that
he thus threatened the world. Shortly after the invasion, the Central
Intelligence Agency, Defense and
Intelligence Agency, and other
intelligence agencies largely discredited evidence related to Iraqi weapons of
mass destruction program as well as links to Al-Qaeda. But after 13 years of war the question remains.
Are we safer?
According
to CBS, "America's foreign policy community has never been in so much
agreement about the performance of an administration overseas, 84 percent of
the respondents think that we're losing the war on terror," Mike Boyer,
editor of the Terrorism Index, says. The numbers show that with the
exception of Afghanistan, the experts think the Bush administration's actions
actually had a negative impact on the war against terror. Eighty-seven percent
say the Iraq war has hurt us, 81 percent say Guantanamo Bay prison has."At
the core of Osama bin Laden's argument is the belief that the U.S. is a nation
that is a predatory power; that is, seeks to occupy other countries, Muslim
countries, seeks to steal their wealth and destroy their religion, and by using
our military the way we have, and particularly by invading Iraq, we have
inadvertently confirmed that message for lots of people in the Muslim world who
are sitting on the fence," believes Daniel Benjamin, a senior fellow at
the Center for Strategic And International Studies. Benjamin, also the
co-author of "The Next Attack," says, "What we have is something
that is spreading, something that is becoming more dangerous. It's like a
cancer that has metastasized and so, instead of being able to point at just one
tumor, you're looking at a lot of bad news in a lot of different
places." The names of the recognizable bogeymen the United States
went after, guns blazing after 9/11, Osama bin Laden, Saddam Hussein, have been
overshadowed by the name of a greater terror, the real enemy, the president and
the policy experts agree, is radical Islam. So how does the United States
fight enemies like these? That's where the controversy comes in. "If
we cast this as a war of religions, if we cast this as a clash of
civilizations, we really are playing into our enemy's hands because there are
1.2 billion Muslims in the world, and we don't need 1.2 billion enemies,"
Daniel Benjamin says."Our goal is to destroy radical Islam. That is the
priority and along the way if we irritate or alienate people, well so be
it," Daniel Pipes, director of the Middle East Forum explains
the strategy, saying, "The rough model for what we do in this war would be
the cold war which lasted for decades. You do everything. "If polls are to
be believed, something else is missing. According to a CBS News/New York
Times poll, 45 percent, nearly half the American public, don't believe
that a president, any president, can do much about terrorism. But number
one on their list: 82 percent said reducing our dependence on foreign oil.
Their rationale, why hand billions of dollars over to the very people who want
to attack us.
With today's security apparatus the 9/11 conspirators would never be able to conduct the same kinds of actions today as they did pre-9/11 getting into the United States, taking flight lessons, and wiring money overseas without catching authorities' attention. Their command and control centers in Germany, where a cell in Hamburg is believed to have planned the 9/11 attacks, as well as Afghanistan and Pakistan either no longer exist or have been severely crippled. Their ability to conduct such an attack has been greatly diminished. Not to mention the raid that killed Osama Bin Laden and the many missions and drone strikes that have killed leaders of al-Qaeda and their affiliates. Al-Qaeda is but a shell of its former self. Mainly new groups have aligned and claimed affiliation with al-Qaeda in recent times ranging from the Arab Spring through the Syria conflict. However, they are predominately local warring factions concentrated on the conflicts taking place in the middle east and in no way the well funded, well trained, well organized and highly secretive al-Qaeda of old. Without a doubt we have severely crippled al-Qaeda's ability to stage an attack on our homeland. Unfortunately, Islam is going through their dark ages and we have not been able to defeat al-Qaeda in ideology. That they must overcome in time and in solidarity. Today our greatest threat is the paradox of the "lone wolf". The singular unremarkable individual deeply embedded in our society who through a set of dynamic psychological responses or pure sociopathic behavior ideologically aligns themselves with the message of al-Qaeda or other terrorist activity and attempts to strike at our homeland. This in time may prove to be the most difficult adversary to overcome.
Stephen,
ReplyDeleteSolid post. Your passion for this topic comes through in your tone. You keep it strong and professional. You also infused some great research (quotes, stats) into the third paragraph, and your historically based intro is excellent. It grabs the readers attention with a sense of urgency.
You open up some good debate about spreading terrorism through the wars in the Middle East (adding fuel to the fire), and how the US has limited Al-Qaeda's scope and reach.
It's true, the war in Syrah and the internal struggles that the Taliban and Al-Qaeda operatives are facing in Afghanistan and Pakistan have almost distracted these groups from mission to target America. Maybe the defense and intelligence apparatus of the US is working to quell attacks that would have slipped through prior to 9/11.
There are lots of angles and topics that you introduce in this piece that are great. You have some great ideas and opened up many smaller debates within your writing. You see this issue as quite complicated.
Great insight.
Great writing.
I also like the images you chose.
Here are some suggestions to strengthen your post/argument:
1. Clearly define your thesis in the first paragraph. You open up many ideas and opinions in the post, but I'm not sure what 1 question you are trying to answer here. Narrow it down and target it throughout. Your thesis should be clearly stated (often in the first or last sentence of an intro).
2. Try to spread your research around - into each paragraph. Paragraph 3 is loaded, while the final paragraph doesn't have any quotes or statistics. Spread the research to each.
3. When discussing the opposing viewpoint, try to distance yourself from that viewpoint (in alignment with your thesis). For instance, you may start that paragraph off with "Those on the left believe" or "The war's detractors claim that..."
In that way, your reader will know that your are discussing a point of view different than your own. Then, they'll expect you to discredit it with your analysis.
4. In your analysis (last paragraph), address your opponents views, head on, by presenting facts that support your side/opinion. This paragraph should be the closer - what your reader should take away from the post. You want them to have no doubt that your view is the best - through convincing writing and excellent research.
Overall, great work - getting stronger each week.
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